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It's pretty good I like the MC so far, but not a lot so far to get to really know him as he barely talks, like his skill with the snakes about two chapters a week which is pretty good for the stability of update, not the best but still good. Has a lot of room for growth and will review it once again after I get a better feel for the story. A couple of con is that the author doesn't really describe character features really well unless you know these characters you won't get a good idea of what they look like. And the beginning feels kinda rush and the why would Maine gang try to kidnap the MC, the only reason they did that with David is that he supposedly stole the main sandevison. Another question I have is, if the snake can swallow implants, can he save those implants for himself or use those snakes to implant those inside of himself otherwise not a bad read for a cyberpunk 2077 fanfic.

The rise of the King cobra

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I wanted to thank you for rating my book and I hope I can continue to let you enjoy. Although I may have started I do still have some trouble in some areas. Some of the questions you have asked will be answered later in later chapters s o please be patient once again thank you for rating my book