the story is pretty ok. Good flow. Btw if the vampire was gonna get eaten anyway why bother saving her(not to the mc, but the authour). The mc is an idiot but cant really blame a bedridden normal earthling to be calculating(boy obviously never read fanfics[this time to mc not authour]) PS- Realistically speaking an evil tyrant kingpin has better things to do than read dragonball so does he know the story?
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