The MC is too bland, he lacks emotion, he doesn't think and talk that much. all he do is fighting monster. Explore more on MC character, his emotion, his thoughts, what is he planning and also world background. Overall its pretty good. but only 4 stars for Writing Quality, Char. Design, and World Background
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