Review Detail of Shatterglass_L in Einar Travers a Crow at the Crossroads (Rough)

Am I really allowed to rate my own work? I'm writing a story I would have loved to find. It's a bit messy because I've never written a story before but let me know what I can do to improve it and I'd appreciate it. Thank you... really though I can give myself a rating 🤣 cool then I give it one fancy crow lol