Review Detail of BorbMeatball in Summoned in a Noble's Body [ Moved to a New Link!!]

Fun story! I am interested in finding out how the two souls thing works out! The take on magic is a bit more unique than other novels as well, which I like. The story is well paced and isn't rushed. I like how the MC advances at a fairly realistic pace given his gifts. However, I would like to see more of how the other characters experience the changes in the MC/Rudra through their reactions, rather than stating how they feel about it. The characters would also benefit from each having a more distinct 'voice' of their own; as right now, they all sound fairly similar in speech. Additionally, a bit more context and comparison for how strong the various warriors and mages are at each rank would help give more meaning to the ranking system. Though, I do like the numerical style as it makes comparison easy. Finally, the style and grammar could be improved. For instance, more imaginative language would help immerse the reader in the story (like in the first chapter, describe Yama and what makes him so scary instead of simply saying he terrified others). Keep it up, author!