I like the way the story is setup and their reunion is pretty touching. I prefer the time skips you did on a on the training parts those who read the manga and watched the anime find it boring so good job on that boring only complaint is how the h*ll is Ayato still alive after 5 years and some more backstory on ayato and his interaction when they were kids would show a more solid understanding of the story to those who arent familiar with how fanfics work
Kirito_K5
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