Review Detail of Eclipse_Gate12 in 中国中

I don't get it, the starting is super bad, the MC was just sitting the whole 5 years then boom the colossal total appeared. Then Carla died, when did Eren even get the titan? How did the MC become a Titan? Too confusing. What are his cheats or does he even have one? Why was he caught/hostaged or something for no reason? It doesn't make sense. I am super frustrated 😩 The writing quality is good, but if you can make it interesting to read it will be best. You see there is no immersion or is it only for me? It is good don't get unmotivated by my review. I am in the court chapter now. Ohh, and if he did have a grudge against Annie he should have tried to kill the armoured and collosal too. it would have been good if two of them were exposed early. The direction the story would have taken would be interesting to see.