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Review Detail of DeathKid in Wild Card In MHA

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DeathKid
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the ability is very creative and good but the mc personality is okay but the way you deliver his speech is too bland he's more like a clown who's trying to make the readers laugh but can't make them it's too awkward personality rather than carefree it's making the story boring wasting the idea of a good ability

Wild Card In MHA

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