Author I really didn't understand your writing style .some small mistakes I can avoid but. you suddenly change the mc thoughts to another character gate confused over and over please fast told us whos thought is this. and I also think your English is to complicated I think it is only my problem because I am not good at English đ€·...... And about the novel when I was started it I really like it and the dolphin accident really is a good reason for whites haunt for 18+ đ but after the second 18+ chapter he just indulge into this too much I'll be honest if I were him I will do the same but aise MC he should be mor like a THE BOYS đ NOT A BIG PERVERT if you are reading thank you for reading đ
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