Review Detail of Arathes in The adventures of my isekai life

Since nobody else will be real with you, I'll be the one to say it. This webnovel is trash. First paragraph in, and the author is already bumbling nonsense akin to "every 60 seconds a minute passes in Africa." Word choice, grammar and flow are terrible. There are far too many mistakes to point out. Instead of wasting your time continuing to write this, go spend your time reading quality isekai webnovels to see how your novel should be written. And at least use an AI editor this time.