Review Detail of ItsHashi in THE WARRIOR PRINCESS

Honest review here, i read the story, and i gotta give some tips and advice. 1. The paragraphs are too long. 2. The story is too fast-paced at times. 3. The sentences are too long, no dots to display a pause. 4. Chapters are too short. Overall the story is good, but i would recommend the author to take these elements into consideration.