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Item: Without Its Beauty
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Hey, the story is great. Try working on the punctuation a bit, though. The story's theme is pretty good! I am certainly looking forward to the next update!

Without Its Beauty

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Okay, thanks, do you mind pointing out where there are punctuation issues? Please, share the book with you friends😁

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