Review Detail of Adaaa in Magic Concept Academy

Item: Magic Concept Academy
Rating: 3.6

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The story is slow paced and there are some grammar mistakes made however the overall story is pretty good. The fighting scenes are slightly unexciting and the world building isn't the best for now as I do not have a proper idea of how the world really functions.

Magic Concept Academy

Claiomh

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ClaiomhAuteurClaiomh

Thank you for the feedback! I understand your complaints and I'll try to improve as I go. Though the story is still in its infancy at 11 chapters, so I hope you'd stick around to see my growth. :)

2yr