Review Detail of Ash_black005 in Naruto : Awaken Haki At The Start

first of all i like the concept of this fanfic ........ one piece in naruto .... though iam naruto die hard fan i will hope not to drop this fanfic . . . . . . about this book let say ideology is nice but i think he will op soon ...... . . . . . how about another renicarnate person as villian