Review Detail of CetusWritings in r0184

After reading a few chapters it's already interesting and I love that the MC is the ruthless type MC and this is definitely better than normal cultivation novels so the author is doing pretty well but the writing quality isn't on par with it's story but I can say the author can break up the paragraphs into smaller versions because of the big paragraphs it's a bit off putting so try and cut them into smaller paragraphs next time but all in all your work is pretty good