Review Detail of DemonGodLirux in Issei Gojo: The strongest

The interactions doenst feel good, it is like you are forcing them every step also the pacing is stremelly fast, this is not the kind of story I would enjoy reading and it is not because of the content it is because of the way you wrote it. since the idea has potencia and I will keep it on the Library and check later if you improve and I may change my review.