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Review Detail of ReyKale in Zero Isn´t Where It Starts(DROPPED, CONTINUING IN ANOTHER BOOK)

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ReyKale
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Zero Isn´t Where It Starts(DROPPED, CONTINUING IN ANOTHER BOOK)

ReyKale

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AdamXIII
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Good, and you?

Spelloyal
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I didn't read the fanfic and I just took a look at the chapter names so I won't write a review but I'm leaving this comment as advice for your future work. I love FMC fanfics and that's why I kept your story in the library for two weeks, checking every now and then if the novel finally became a fanfic before I started reading, today with 20 days since its release and no fanfic I'm completely giving up to read this novel. Before writing you should think a little about your target audience, in the case of a fanfic your target audience are mainly ACG fans who want to see different scenarios in their favorite stories. By writing a fanfic with 30 chapters without involving ACG characters you are basically no longer writing a fanfic but an original story and naturally it won't attract readers in the fanfics section. If you had started in an ACG world, sent the MC to an ACG world or summoned ACG characters in these chapters you would have reached at least a few readers but as it stands this is unlikely to happen even if you send the MC to another world in the next chapter.

ReyKale
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Oohhh, thx, was thinking that too, I am thinking of putting this as a like the spinoff story of the my character, I am thankful that you give it a chance, and I am planning on doing a Book 2, where it will actually be the fanfiction part, things got out of hand because I got too many ideas and started writing them down, and here we are, so ye, When I get to Book 2 feel free to give a try, until them thanks for giving this one a read^^

Spelloyal:I didn't read the fanfic and I just took a look at the chapter names so I won't write a review but I'm leaving this comment as advice for your future work. I love FMC fanfics and that's why I kept your story in the library for two weeks, checking every now and then if the novel finally became a fanfic before I started reading, today with 20 days since its release and no fanfic I'm completely giving up to read this novel. Before writing you should think a little about your target audience, in the case of a fanfic your target audience are mainly ACG fans who want to see different scenarios in their favorite stories. By writing a fanfic with 30 chapters without involving ACG characters you are basically no longer writing a fanfic but an original story and naturally it won't attract readers in the fanfics section. If you had started in an ACG world, sent the MC to an ACG world or summoned ACG characters in these chapters you would have reached at least a few readers but as it stands this is unlikely to happen even if you send the MC to another world in the next chapter.
Spelloyal
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I will wait for this. But I was thinking that if you're satisfied with what you've written, it might be worth it to just drop the idea of turning the novel into a fanfic and repost it as an original work.

ReyKale:Oohhh, thx, was thinking that too, I am thinking of putting this as a like the spinoff story of the my character, I am thankful that you give it a chance, and I am planning on doing a Book 2, where it will actually be the fanfiction part, things got out of hand because I got too many ideas and started writing them down, and here we are, so ye, When I get to Book 2 feel free to give a try, until them thanks for giving this one a read^^
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ReyKale
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Just did lol, Webnovel made some strange stuff with my story, so I am reposting as a Original Novel, same name, didn't change anything, just fixed some things from the grammar ^^.

Spelloyal:I will wait for this. But I was thinking that if you're satisfied with what you've written, it might be worth it to just drop the idea of turning the novel into a fanfic and repost it as an original work.