Review Detail of MrNiab in Carl The Jumper (original)

first I want to say I am happy to see another jump chain story since they seem somewhat rare to find. Your story has a good start but there are two major problems I have seen so far. It would appear a lot of sentences are getting cut off on the side so you should look that over. Second, usually, the first 100 cp options for both perks and items are free for the origin you selected. Also, you might want to look up some supplements like body mod and warehouse.