Okay, first of all, I am aware that this particular story is "fast-paced", however, the lack of descriptions and explanations about the story's events prevents the reader to be fully engrossed with the book. I will advise the author to study the "show, don't tell" technique if he plans to rewrite the story. Focusing on its positive aspects, the system seems to be interesting and the plot, although it can be a bit generic at times, seems to be planned nicely. I'm looking forward to the author's rewrite of this story and possibly be able to improve this review to a 5-star one ^^ Keep it up!
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