Review Detail of Xalysian in The Tale Of The Worst One

I'm liking the plot so far in this revenge story. God, I love revenge type of stories when they are done right! The descriptive narration is decent at best but hey, we gotta start somewhere when it comes to narrative writing! And so far it's going well with the details of the characters' voicelines. I can't wait until the author came back with more and more chapters to come. Give this a read already if you haven't!