apart from some mistakes when the characters launch ki attacks from their arms even though they are completely broken and turned at a weird angle and the MC is often caught off guard for no reason, the fic is good.
Zeroskii
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COMMEHmmm..I don't think I ever got the MC or Canon characters launch Ki attacks with both their arms broken..If they did I mostly pointed that out. I'll word it better so there is no confusion if they are using one handed Ki Attacks. :) Also regarding the getting caught off guard is due to the lack of combat awareness and experience as the MC is not skilled from the beginning. Thanks for the review