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Review Detail of samtheking01 in Son of Thor - Marvel

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samtheking01
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I feel like this story has a lot of potential but I personally feel that your bias against some characters I feel like if you wrote with someone editing and making some corrections it might actually be really good let me know if you want some help I’ m not the best but we could try.(I know this is a run on sentence😂)

Son of Thor - Marvel

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takeoffyourbra
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looks like but isn't

MimicReads:sounds like CN
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sounds like CN

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true

MimicReads:sounds like CN