Review Detail of Lemonbunzz in Reincarnated As A God Of Water
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Just a honest opinion. Story Development is bad. There is not much exciting story to it and it's very confusing. Characters just pops up with little to no introduction to them. It make excited what going to come and happen in the chapter and new characters would just add more things me to get confused about. How about when introducing a new god, give us a brief description of him/her appearance/behavior as well as his domain e.g is he/she a god of fire, god of water, etc. although it's a very small thing. Could've started with a better ranking system instead of just doing 2/12, 3/12, 4/12, so on and so forth... it looks too plain.. đ€Ł
Reincarnated As A God Of Water
The_FBI_god
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Lemonbunzz:You don't have to remember it tho you can write important details like important events, character's current stats, or characters description in some kind of notebook or in your device that you can review in case you forget something. kind of like a database for your novel. Authors do that to make consistent novels
Well, yeah, the power system might seem lame and lackluster in the begining, I can admit that, but in the end, it was for future development. As for the thoughts on my characters; I can somewhat agree with you! I started writing this story almost a year ago, when I was sixteen, while english wasn't my major language, so my writing was very bad in the early chapters in the story. but back to point, to put it simply, I was bad at descriptions in the begining and found it hard to remember my characters appearance and since they were going to change later on, I ignored it in the begining, no defence there :( In the end the arc you read, volume two was a side story and most of the characters would be gone a bit later, that's also why it might seem, or feel rushed. Thanks for the review, have a great day :)
You don't have to remember it tho you can write important details like important events, character's current stats, or characters description in some kind of notebook or in your device that you can review in case you forget something. kind of like a database for your novel. Authors do that to make consistent novels
The_FBI_god:Well, yeah, the power system might seem lame and lackluster in the begining, I can admit that, but in the end, it was for future development. As for the thoughts on my characters; I can somewhat agree with you! I started writing this story almost a year ago, when I was sixteen, while english wasn't my major language, so my writing was very bad in the early chapters in the story. but back to point, to put it simply, I was bad at descriptions in the begining and found it hard to remember my characters appearance and since they were going to change later on, I ignored it in the begining, no defence there :( In the end the arc you read, volume two was a side story and most of the characters would be gone a bit later, that's also why it might seem, or feel rushed. Thanks for the review, have a great day :)