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This looked promising until the countless errors, less narratives and more dialogues, the synopsis was really confusing and soooo brief. The introduction of the characters was also not very enticing, the title is long and obvious but I still decided to give this a read, the chapters are also short and I've seen several books that begins with how a relative of the FL wakes her up.*I'm going to delete this review if the author isn't comfortable* but mistakes and errors should be fixed, the book is currently in my library and it'll patiently wait til' you fix everything. The story looks interesting btw and you're not a bad author<3

My cold and grumpy husband is actually my childhood sweetheart

Jain_Ran

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thank you this is my my first time writing a novel 😅😅😅 will make sure to do better