Review Detail of SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST in HARRY POTTER:MAGICAL PREDATOR SYSTEM

There is little continuity and cohesion to the story for atleast the 18 chapters I tried to read. Its worse that the passage of time isn't made clear and that chronologically not much makes sense when compared with the HP books. Characters also do a sudden 180 in their disposition to eachother which is very confusing. The story feels like a patchwork of scenes that are chronologically out of order and thus don't make sense.