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Shameless newbie author here! Hello people potentially reading this, I would like to introduce myself, first I'm french so their will be grammars and structurations problems in my fanfic, I am only 18 years so obviously not the most experienced in life that would be seen in my writing since Beastars is a complex universe that reflect real life problems. Please point things out that I might have messed up or missed. Critics will also help me improve. Merci les gens d'avoir perdu votre temps pour lire ça.
Beastars: The Naga
The_Bip_Boop2003
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Adult, he will be more or less 20 meters long (62,6ft) from the tip of the nose to the tip of the tail but has the potential to grow bigger as he ages. I think Rokume/the rattlesnake is bigger than the norm for her species because if it's the average length of a rattlesnake, imagine the size of a riticulated python in Beastars.
Kevin_Pollard:I forgit to ask but How big do plan to make him, if the security guard from the anime is any sign and him being a naga, he might not fit in the building and if he gets a proper diet, he'll look like something from greek mythos.
so yep something outta greek mythos. he slithers in the school, he owns the school. Im gonna assume he gonna take over the duchy his mom left. honestly outside of japan. the limitless amount of plots you could make.
The_Bip_Boop2003:Adult, he will be more or less 20 meters long (62,6ft) from the tip of the nose to the tip of the tail but has the potential to grow bigger as he ages. I think Rokume/the rattlesnake is bigger than the norm for her species because if it's the average length of a rattlesnake, imagine the size of a riticulated python in Beastars.
