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3 chapters in and the story as well as the quality of writing is pretty good, the only thing I absolutely hate is when the author writes in all caps. This is unnecessary and hard to read whenever I see it.
Hinata's Sensual Adventure
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I apologize for the caps. This site requires premium membership in order to use italic, which is what I use to narrate the character's inner-thoughts. Most writers had to go with the same alternative. You can always read the story on another platform, if the caps are too much. But I'm happy you're liking the story so far.