Review Detail of Shad in Alternate World: I Started With Two SSS Templates

The story idea is great but the flow of the story is a mess especially when nearing chapter 40 it just jumps to a story without coherance just making it confusing and lots of details is missing and the idea of changing templates instead of combining them and have an OP MCis just mess up whats the point of having 2 of them and cant use the skills from the other template.