Review Detail of AlphonseDarkshield in Invincible SI: Actually Invincible
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The story is rather entertaining with suitable character development, entertaining premice, fun, a nice changing of “scenery” and a nice power scale. My only real issue is like how you started to do after a certain point in Grunts story near the end you kinda just said f natural progression and it’s affected your further works. Here you are definitely trying to put some back in because unlike the other stories he doesn’t have the cheat of Grunts full blown meta power but it feels a little too fast paced making it “feel” rushed…
Invincible SI: Actually Invincible
JManM
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Well I kinda would have preferred he maybe had a little more interesting fights before he went top of his universe level… I just feel that he is too powerful for cinematic universes and in his own universe he’s basically towards the top already
JManM:So are you feeling like they need more social scenes?
AlphonseDarkshield:Well I kinda would have preferred he maybe had a little more interesting fights before he went top of his universe level… I just feel that he is too powerful for cinematic universes and in his own universe he’s basically towards the top already