Review Detail of AlexL96 in Marvel: I'm The Smartest And I'll Never Lose

In general, I liked the book. It has potential. The main problem with it is that you rush the story a lot from childhood until he takes over the company, with a love relationship, you put everything in about 3 chapters, it's very rushed... I've read many Chinese Japanese English and Latin web novels, although as a reader I would like the author to write faster I like the story to develop freely that the love interests are not only in one chapter but that they have their plot development as how the story began romance the thoughts of the protagonist and the heroine, some chapter from the perspective of the heroine of love rivals, that you don't just put everything in a few chapters.... and you should rewrite the first chapters don't put everything in so little no from unnecessary jumps there are many things that can happen maybe you could make mc save tony when he is fighting with his uncle, oh meet other characters as an example the fantastic 4 you.... I really liked the idea of ​​the book but you're not executing it very well.... and one thing you should eliminate scott's ntr, scott should die I never liked him in marvel comics and less in movies or fanfics....