in general the fanfic is not bad but the mc development is mediocre at best. he has all the tool to improove his strength rapidily but he doesn't do that(future knowledge_strong reason_bloodline). he barely show any improvement and the only thing he is doing is wasting his time. Then it come his mother pregancy from nowhere, totally seving no perpose at all. That was the worst events ever.
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