The scenes were executed nicely and the grammar is really good :3 It's just that I was quite lost at the 1st chap, there's a lack of information like how Seth got the power or even a small flashback of his life. Tho, it's a nice story, with an organized style of writing, making it easier for me to read it ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ
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