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I think that after the little introduction, you got into a stable grove and the quality was at a good level. I may recommend doing a second pass on the first few paragraphs, as I had to read it twice to fully get it. Other than that, good concept

Wrath of the Storm God

Ramirys

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Ramirys
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Thank you, I'll reread the first few paragraphs later and try to fix them if possible!