Review Detail of Kami_with_a_pen in You Shall Pay For Your Sins Even If You Are A God

Item: You Shall Pay For Your Sins Even If You Are A God
Rating: 4

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Kami_with_a_penLv22yrKami_with_a_pen

Story devlopment is good I like it keep it up. I am looking forward for next chapter🤗. There some mistakes in tenses making it a little harder to understand .

You Shall Pay For Your Sins Even If You Are A God

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Thank you Tanishq for review I am sorry for my mistakes in writing but am not a native speaker . I will try my best to improve[img=recommend]

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