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Review Detail of Janie_Endah in First Love of mine

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Janie_Endah
Janie_EndahLv21yrJanie_Endah

the synopsis is quite interesting. the dialogue between the characters is good as well. But, the narrative is a little bit confusing to me. Nonetheless, you're doing great.

First Love of mine

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Thanks for sharing ur opinion.. ☺️