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Zelenesenki
ZelenesenkiLv12yrZelenesenki

The idea of character development is there, even the MC is too brazen for himself 😂 which is kinda funny. This just needs a little organizing here and there and you're good to go since the grammar is okay.

Fool's Guide To The Apocalypse

Littleplotter

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Littleplotter
LittleplotterAuteurLittleplotter

Do you mind telling me what aspects need to be organised? Though I'm not serious with the novel, I still don't want it to be too bad. :)

Zelenesenki
ZelenesenkiLv1Zelenesenki

Ahh yes I was just confused a little with the Chapter titles 😂 it made it difficult to follow because it said~ 1 Chapter Zero: Prologue" there's 1 and 0 so it got me astray a bit thinking that I skipped a chapter when I continued reading.

Littleplotter:Do you mind telling me what aspects need to be organised? Though I'm not serious with the novel, I still don't want it to be too bad. :)