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heavy au dxd so far far with marius tepes being a perv for Valerie and rizevim arriving at vampire faction early. mc is dumb for not teleporting away from rizevim and trying to fight him.
Demon in DxD
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I guess I didn't word it correctly. Rizevim created a separate space where he couldn't just leave if he wanted too so he didn't really have a choice in fighting Rizevim. Sure he didn't have to enter but like he said he didn't know it was Rizevim and thought it was some random weakling not one of the strongest beings in the world.
Mehhhh Growing up means acknowledging your weaknesses and strengths. Without planning, it is stupid to fight against someone stronger, much more intelligent, more masculine and above all having the opportunity to avoid the fight.
Shikdi_1:Have you heard of character development? And it is a FANFICTION it will be AU since a exact copy of the story would be stupid. It just started. Chill out.
Babydeath:you should read the next chapter, because the next chapter in my opinion is very interesting
I read it, it seems he goes berserk and grows stronger then turns into another race then rips off rizevims arm causing him to retreat .after reading the rest I change my opinion I give the story three stars
Babydeath:you should read the next chapter, because the next chapter in my opinion is very interesting
Yes.but that's stupidly dumb character development fighting someone who can easily kill u..even 10 years kids know who they should mess or not
Shikdi_1:Have you heard of character development? And it is a FANFICTION it will be AU since a exact copy of the story would be stupid. It just started. Chill out.
My guy there is a clear difference between making a mistake due to ignorance and making mistakes that you should not do since you have the knowledge, the mc was just dumb
Shikdi_1:Have you heard of character development? And it is a FANFICTION it will be AU since a exact copy of the story would be stupid. It just started. Chill out.
