The idea is interesting, but I refuse to read more than 2 chapters. It doesn't matter how fun the story is, if my eyes are bleeding reading it. Do some(a lot of) spell checks and it's gonna be much better. If English is not your first language, and you suck at it, then don't write in it.
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