Review Detail of ToujiSouya in Hollywood King

A big problem I have with this novel is the drama and I feel most people that read far enough know what I’m talking about. If the drama was removed and the story had another storyline I believe it would flow better as the drama ruins the flow of the novel. An example being the drama about Will being a dad, for the conclusion to be pointless and if you took out this section of the novel nothing would have changed.