This novel has a lot of potential. The writing quality of the author is quite impressive considering it's their first novel and beyond that they seem to have a great grasp on what they want to do with the story. Keep up the great work author! The only change I would have is to increase the chapter rate, once you do that you're golden.
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COMMEMythicBunny:thank you very much for your review kind sir.... Even I would like to update more, but due to personal reasons I can't... the fact that I am just doing this for pastime, also doesn't help ...