Review Detail of Goldenswiftreader in Karma Corpse System Omniversal

Author insert here, I believe in completing what I start, but the journey may be a bit, since you know life and other obligations. This is my first attempt at a work and I will make mistakes, it's up to the readers to help me write. Without feedback I lose focus and energy, just like any other person. Thank you for reading my work, please comment, review and whatnot.