I recommend to have someone that actually know the English language to point out your errors and spelling mistakes. Lot's of grammatical errors in the text as well as using wrong terms for different things, example: calling the first years "freshmen". The story seems like it might be decent if not for the glaring errors making it unreadable. Dropped.
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