Great story so far, and amazing potential for plot development! The writing quality is pretty good, albeit with the occasional spelling error. The stability of Updates is decent, considering the length of the chapters and how the author is doing other works. Story development has been well-paced so far, and entertaining. And lastly, the character and world designs/backgrounds flow nicely together, and allow us readers to understand what is going on in the world, and for the author to manipulate certain aspects without going full-blown "AU" on us.
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