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Review Detail of The_Fallen_Eroge in From The Smoke (Ben Reilly Marvel SI)

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The_Fallen_Eroge
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A depressed spiderman that will also make you depressed and frustrated. The grammar is great and so is the pacing of the story so if you're feeling way too high and happy right now, try reading this as a dose of depression. Review is base from chapter 1-10.

From The Smoke (Ben Reilly Marvel SI)

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DragonField
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I was splitting my chapters in two so you only really read the first five chapters. We are at chapter 29 overall now and my dude is happy at the moment, which is amplified bbecause he was so down before.

The_Fallen_Eroge
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Interesting

DragonField:I was splitting my chapters in two so you only really read the first five chapters. We are at chapter 29 overall now and my dude is happy at the moment, which is amplified bbecause he was so down before.
Darwin111111
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No. I think what depresses you is the long description, and the feeling that you will need 5 chapters to advance even a minute..

The_Fallen_Eroge
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Could be, i already forgot the exact reason but maybe it's just my own external stimuli and add on with what you observe.

Darwin111111:No. I think what depresses you is the long description, and the feeling that you will need 5 chapters to advance even a minute..