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Review Detail of Yassybella in Fellblades

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Yassybella
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It's an exciting beginning of the story, the onset of rebirth for a great warrior back to a newly born baby. The grammar is okay; though it needs some proofreading and editing, it did not affect the storyline. Worth reading!

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Fellblades

Yusco

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Yusco
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Thank you for the feedback, i don't currently have a proofreader but I'll look into it😇. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.