It is good, like you said, it's a short story too and you don't intend for it to go big, so the 1 chapter is understandable. Overall, it's really good so far. The grammar better than the majority of the books on this platform.
RaiyAkumu
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COMMEI am glad you enjoyed chapter one. If you have any suggestions on what I might need to fix or add, please let me know, I am always willing to accept criticism. I hope you continue to read my story, I am trying to give it a unique articulation of details, and really bring out the first-person perspective. Thanks for the review.