I don't want to waste time giving you constructive criticism, only that the protagonist revealed everything to Dumbledore.... The end! . . . .
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COMMECodeSpectre:Did you even read the story ?? While the mc tried to reveal everything to Dumbledore,it didn't work since he hears completely different unrelated things....
Okay, here I go... In the first few chapters he mentions that old evil Dumbledore, subsequently his attempt to reveal all contradicts his words. I'm going to read it again and give constructive criticism.
AvengerV:Really ? You read the same thing that me ?
HP魔法传记 无限之至尊巫师 哈利波特之渡鸦之爪 冠冕下的荣光 哈利波特之血獵者 Maybe some of these harry potter novels you might like, "attention" are very hidden titles that I haven't read yet.
free_life:Well, thank you. this is the best review I've ever found ... ❤
GotaDeAgua:HP魔法传记 无限之至尊巫师 哈利波特之渡鸦之爪 冠冕下的荣光 哈利波特之血獵者 Maybe some of these harry potter novels you might like, "attention" are very hidden titles that I haven't read yet.