I'm doing this review solely based on writing quality as the story is still progressing and there isn't much to comment on that. I don't have any issues with writing quality except that some starting/naming letters were not capitalized and it felt repetitive. I would suggest using Grammarly or Google Docs for spell checks to avoid such mistakes. Nevertheless, the story itself is very good in all honesty and I would like to read it further and see how the world develops.
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