Review Detail of WalterHeisenberg in One Piece: Anything is Possible!

Nothing much to read since it’s just 10 chaps currently, so I’ll give it a 5 star for good luck. The things that I can see that would prob need improvement later on when there’s more chapters is the usage of words(flow of the sentences/paragraph), dialogue(characters interacting with each other) and last but not least the Mc(personality/character development) I can see these having a high chance of being a problem in this ff. It’s only a possibility not a sure thing.