Shameless author review 5 star review. And please point out some of my mistakes and please give some criticism so I can improve the story and my translation skills.

The fanfic is not bad, but we have some problems in the translation, mainly in some terms referring to KHR that the translator needs to correct before I give 5 stars. I'm a little used to MTL so I can enjoy reading even with these terms mistranslated, but I must admit that this certainly turns off many readers and would be a much more enjoyable read without this problem. Apart from that, we have other small problems in the translation that are easily acceptable and ignored when considering that it's a fanfic and it's free. I think it's a good place for the translator to hone his skills and I'm not going to drop stars for that. The fanfic itself is very good so far, despite being a Chinese fanfic it's not full of the nasty wuxia and xianxia cliches that these fanfics usually have and that's a big plus point. It's an enjoyable read and I recommend everyone to give it a try.

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its a great idea, but the writing need improvement. dialogue doesnt really make sense for the characters espcially when u consider age and circumstances, characters also feels shallow. flesh it out more and it'll be great.

The pacing is good but the translation of the Reborn items are a bit off. It destroys the immersion because you'll be thinking what the is the mc talking about but, There's few Reborn fanfic so that's something to look forward to. Can't really give a high valuation of the character design and world as this is a fanfic.

just found this novel ........ feeling good about this novel . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .. . .... . . . . . . .. . . . m m m m m . . . ... . . . .... .. . . . ... .... .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Super generic Chinese infested fanfic, Chinese people just dont know how to write good stories it seems they all feels the same no matter what gener. The plot is all over the place and its riddled with holes.

Great story were one transmigrate to mavel world mixed with DC and gets a System were he needs to create his own vongola Familia only sadd thing is that the Original is on Hitarus after chapter 127

Katekyo Hitman Reborn deserves all the stars possible. The work is using a very interesting KHR system, I'm really looking forward to seeing this amazing series gain more views.